Acknowledgments ix
Introduction The Sentence: The Writer’s Most Important Tool 1
Chapter 1 Who Cares? Making Sentences Meaningful to Your
Reader 7
Chapter 2 Conjunctions That Kill: Subordination 15
Chapter 3 Movable Objects: Understanding Phrases and Clauses 29
Chapter 4 Size Matters: Short versus Long Sentences 36
Chapter 5 Words Gone Wild: Sentences That Say Nothing—or
Worse 53
Chapter 6 Words Gone Mild: Choosing Specific Words Over Vague Ones
61
Chapter 7 A Frequently Overstated Case: The Truth About Adverbs
65
Chapter 8 Are Your Relatives Essential? Relative Clauses 72
Chapter 9 Antique Desk Suitable for Lady with Thick Legs and Large
Drawers: Prepositional Phrases 80
Chapter 10 Dangler Danger: Participles and Other Danglers 85
Chapter 11 The Writing Was Ignored by the Reader: Passives 90
Chapter 12 You Will Have Been Conjugating: Other Matters of Tense
98
Chapter 13 The Being and the Doing Are the Killing of Your Writing:
Nominalizations 107
Chapter 14 The The: Not-So-Definite Definite Articles 112
Chapter 15 The Writer and His Father Lamented His Ineptitude:
Unclear Antecedents 116
Chapter 16 To Know Them Is to Hating Them: Faulty and Funky
Parallels 122
Chapter 17 Taking the Punk Out of Punctuation: The Problem with
Semicolons and Parentheses 125
Chapter 18 You Don’t Say: Descriptive Quotation Attributions
131
Chapter 19 Trimming the Fat: Expressions That Weigh Down Your
Sentences 134
Chapter 20 The Major Overhaul: Streamlining Even the Most
Problematic Sentences 149
Chapter 21 On Breaking the “Rules”: Knowing When to Can the Canons
164
Appendix 1 Grammar for Writers 167
Appendix 2 Punctuation Basics for Writers 191
Appendix 3 The Deadliest Catches: The Most Incriminating Errors and
How to Avoid Them 204
About the Author 208
Index 209
June Casagrande is the author of the weekly syndicated “A Word, Please” grammar column and a copy editor for the custom publishing department of the Los Angeles Times. She has worked as a reporter, features writer, city editor, proofreader, and copyediting instructor for UC San Diego Extension. She is the author of Grammar Snobs Are Great Big Meanies, Mortal Syntax, and It Was the Best of Sentences, It Was the Worst of Sentences. She lives in Pasadena, California, with her husband. Visit www.junecasagrande.com.
“an editor and grammar columnist’s funny but no-nonsense guide to
better writing.” —St. Petersburg Times
“Great writing starts with strong sentences. This is your guidebook
to mastering the art.”
—DONALD MAASS, literary agent and author of The Fire in Fiction
“June mixes sassy fun with practical advice. You’ll laugh all the
way to writing better.”
—MIGNON FOGARTY, author of Grammar Girl’s Quick and Dirty Tips for
Better Writing
“It Was the Best of Sentences, It Was the Worst of Sentences is
that incredibly rare breed of book: a guide to grammar and style
that is simultaneously smart, engaging, and instructive. By
tackling prose composition on a sentence-by-sentence level, June
Casagrande has found a way to provide intensely practical advice
for the novice writer—not to mention unexpected insights for the
expert writer. It would make a welcome addition to any language
lover’s library.”
—ELIZABETH LITTLE, author of Biting the Wax Tadpole
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